Scream Poem by Hope Elizabeth

Scream

Rating: 4.0


Sometimes I want to scream
I want to be set free
I used to cry out and yell
So my problems would fall
But that never worked at all

Talking kills me
Nobody understands me
So I'm trapped mentally
And I can never be set free

It's sad because I used to dream
I used to be a real human being
But it's because of them that I am me
But in reality, I will never be me
The true me, the real me, the believable me
Not the authenticity that they always see

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Harper 10 July 2010

i can really feel your emotion in this piece it llike your letting it out through your writting. good work

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Maya (ayam) Armstrong 06 June 2010

This this wonderful. I think this is one of your best poems. I'm not the best writer but I know a good poem when I see one. I do see any need of changing a word in this poem.

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