Searching For Way Out Poem by jax col

Searching For Way Out



How sad for it all to come to this
How sad for it all to be
We’ve annoyed each other way too much
And now we’ve hit a tree

Is there any more that we can do
Is there any where to go
These feelings between us now
Have hit an all time low

What do we do to mend the bridge
What do we do now
Our lives are splitting from each other
With each and every row

Is this the way its going to end
Is this what lies ahead
Around each and every corner
All relationships turn to lead

Can we turn the boat around
Can we bridge the gap
Can we make the flower grow again
And stop the dripping tap

Where id the way from this hole
Where is the light shining from
Is it somewhere near us
‘Coz I know it’s not yet gone

We can get back what we had before
We can make it all work out
And if it isn’t just like before
At least something’s better than nowt.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tai Chi Italy 09 July 2008

I like this poem because it is communicating and that is what relationship that succeed need to do. Yes there is a way out, it is talking and working at your relationship that makes it strong and lasting. Nothing else will do the trick. Good work Jax

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