Monday, December 14, 2015

Shattered Comments

Rating: 5.0

The mirror who was once her only friend
Turns into an enemy
Staring, searching, confused
Yet she can't find herself
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Anastasia Onyinye Donatus
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Howard Savage 05 January 2016

This is a profound poem, Looking in the mirror and not recognizing herself. Time brings about changes.#10

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Anastasia Donatus 24 March 2016

Thank you very much

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 December 2015

I can't see positivity, all I see is shattered negativity smiling at me She had always replied Her tears seems to never dry Crying was her only escape... this shattered me.. never believe in negativity. life turns over suddenly. hope for a better future. God is with you. enter into prayer. you will see your life changes. thank you for this very good poem which make the reader think a lot. thank you very much. tony

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Anastasia Donatus 24 March 2016

Thank you, Dr Tony

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