Monday, August 24, 2009

She - For You My Unconditional, Infinate Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

She is a girl, her mind in a whirl
Does she know who I am?
She’s been call mad and demented
Her life is such a sham
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Patrick A. Martin 24 August 2009

I had a boy like that once and I just had to keep writing about him until we became friends - see my poem Wounded Boy...... I like this it's raw honesty is beautiful hang on to that girl with both hands she's real 10

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