Saturday, April 25, 2009

Simple Pleasures Comments

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Give me a sapphire sky above my head
With stars to guide my way
An alabaster moonlit night
And the golden sun by day
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Monica E. Smith
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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 April 2009

Give me wind at my back to ease my way A breeze to cool desire A gentle breath that whispers love And for passion, give me fire.......................... .dappled wings of love awes in void sultry wind yet blows on elysian bay butterfly gently ruffles over the tuft looking to grin of green over scarlet hue..............gallant exposition of ingenious yet luscios flow of sweet wishes of soul rippling over the rungs of cascade by the wonderful imagery of nature, l 10+++++++, i do enjoy the great write, thanks for sharing

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