Friday, September 26, 2008

Slatternhouse Comments

Rating: 5.0

You can't be seen like that.
What will people think?
Is that old paint round your windows?
(Which haven't been cleaned, by the way)
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Kevin Eaglesfield
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Fay Slimm 27 September 2008

This is a clever play on house and on a young woman - methinks anyway. I lovYe the pouting of the scarlet door, and batting of the skyblue curtains, making the reader draw different conclusions to the obvious. You have a poet's unique turn of mind, well done Kev. Ten to be sure. from Fay.

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