Thursday, June 25, 2009

Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s amazing what you can hide behind a smile
All the secrets that everyone will never know
Also all the pain that you keep to yourself
If you just keep smiling no one will ever guess
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Barbara Terry 25 June 2009

I do know what it is like to hide behind a smile. Those that know me personally know that my smile in public is just a facade hiding pain after excruciating pain. This poem says a lot, and it is so true too. A 10+++++. There are a few typos though throughout the poem. Please re-read this and correct them. Thank you. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Dana Amer 25 June 2009

Its so true, sometimes i really feel that my smile hides my pain, written in such an ammazing way!

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