Thursday, October 13, 2011

So Far Gone Comments

Rating: 3.0

im so far gone.
everything is wrong.
im lost in my mind.
and all the thoughts that i hide.
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Nicola Hanks
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Jeremiah Walton 14 October 2011

I enjoyed the poem, but you should review grammar and not use abbreviations such as 'bc'. It makes it look sloppy. Good work other wise though, good content

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