Friday, March 10, 2006

So Many Things Comments

Rating: 5.0

So many things I'd like to say to you
But it's not like my words matter anyway
So many things I'd like to share with you
But when I'm close you always fade away
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King Midas
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I like this poem a lot, really picks up pace and feelign at the end. respect, JB

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Dom Sciacca 10 March 2006

i think this is my new favorite, what is that called anaphora? shamed - sickened- sadened- haunted- its very good, as always

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