Thursday, May 14, 2009

Sol Solis Quod Luna (Sun And Moon) Comments

Rating: 4.8

The burning light of mighty Ra
The brilliant shine of our own star
The all Seeing Eye, the sun above
Watching over war, peace and love
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Aaron Douglas 31 August 2009

i really like this, it's almost a sonnet and along with the rhyme scheme its a great poem.

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