Monday, July 7, 2008

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death is my friend
and duty is my responsibility
fearless iam and iam determined
iam the soldier
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himanshu sharma
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C. P. Sharma 30 October 2008

hi himanshu, You have done well. You could improve it further. CP

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Himanshu Sharma 08 July 2008

thanx to u also for appraisal about this poem

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