Saturday, February 8, 2014

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One bush grows outside
one or two Rose will prevail
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RickyLee Barber
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Adeline Foster 18 February 2014

A lovely haiku. Numerically rose should be roses, but that is easily fixed. Simply switch it to: Two or one rose will prevail. The teacher in me will ever prevail. Adeline

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