Sunday, June 21, 2009

Some Things Comments

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As the sun sets and the tides change
You realize some things you can’t rearrange
Try as you wish, and wish as you try
Keep in mind the birds will still fly
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Adam Geiger
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Nothern Cross 31 July 2009

Great story liked it a lot.

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Stephanie Starr 29 July 2009

You write beautifully. The message of the poem is unique and the words you chose to describe it set it alight. Good job, I hope you write more poems in the near future.

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