Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Song Of Peace Comments

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I have travelled round the world
Not so many cities I have been
Yet feel I little of things unseen
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Christine Blaydes 19 March 2014

A song of peace is a song of beauty Slant rhymes are used, I don't think it's fruity... Very well written, Keep it up!

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