Laughing below, the unimagined room
in unimagined mouths,
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Hi Karen, a sonnet is 14 lines, usually three verses and a couplet. I found your poem too subjective as I imagine most others would, although some lines sparked imagery. I don't mean to be too negative, though at least you deserve to know what I feel.....Success with your writing!
Hi Karen, you actually made a new poetic sensitivity by using some unique surreal images, and you also simulate your reader to make lots of links and interpretations. Dr. Mohammed Sameer Literary Critic