Friday, July 21, 2017

Sonnet- Viii Comments

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How precious is the time please let me know?
Am I demanding you the way I ask?
The time is brief to be precise when dusk—
Adheres on us, then it would serve a tow.
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Sherwin Ilagan
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 July 2017

when dusk- Adheres on us; then it will serve the tow. Abundant love shall live ‘gainst undertow He is the bridge of mortal long sojourn, And thou art mine abode to be preserve.. inside my heart. what shall i say...... this is wonderful.. poetic genius are you dear poetess. i want to read all the sonnets so that i may get into your mind.. tha nk you dear poetess. tony

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