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Spring Forward

Rating: 5.0
May has come, a broken Spring
Fractured girl, broken wings
Test the Spring, Spring failure
Spring Mess, may I change here?
This May, I might
Think I should, think I'll fight
Thinking would-
Help me pass; ace the test
Clean the floors
Mop up this mess
As I leave here,
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Spring Forward
Thursday, September 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction,recovery from
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COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore 20 September 2018
Beauvoir girl, evolution Spring forward in the revolution Fractured wings, but brand new Springs..i murdered all that was bad in my life.. very nice poem with a noble philosophy. lovely. tony
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Nicole Settimi 25 September 2018
Thx so much for your priceless feedback! I am always grateful. Xx NDS
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Anil Kumar Panda 11 September 2018
A beautiful poem with a nice flow and very well crafted on spring. 'I murdered the disease I murdered the addiction I murdered both of these Things. Dead.'..is so very touching.Thanks for sharing.10+++
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Nicole Settimi 18 September 2018
Thx so much, flattered you've enjoyed this so deeply. Xx, NDS
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Anil Kumar Panda 11 September 2018
A beautiful poem with a nice flow and very well crafted on spring. 'I murdered the disease I murdered the addiction I murdered both of these Things. Dead.'..is so very touching. Liked it. Thanks for sharing.10+++
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 September 2018
amazing poem is very intelligently coined or penned only the other day I was in Niagara how I wish i knew I'd loved to have met you Kindly read my poems two Moms Smiles and Mother's Day Today u'd love these and many more if these two can you allure thanks ere more
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Nicole Settimi 11 September 2018
Thx for the kind words! Niagara is my hometown, but I don't actually live there now. :) I appreciate the feedback and will peruse your own. Xx NDS
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2018
A broken spring is witnessed as May has arrived. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.10
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Nicole Settimi 06 September 2018
Thx for the lovely comments, I am so thrilled you enjoyed it. Best, NDS
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