Wednesday, November 14, 2012
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Stars, I watch them
They call me as I call
Waiting to be returned
Finished with this world
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SomeoneOutThere DreamingPeacefully
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2/28/2026 11:13:01 AM # 1.0.0
nice piece, in lines 6,8 and 11, if you move these in a space and dropp the capital letters it would emphasise the sense of the run-on line, and the way that they can seem to slow.