Stars Poem by jan fuentez

Stars

Rating: 5.0


The stars flicker like tiny bulbs
What a lovely night I said
But is it really lovely night?
Can't find the real answer
Maybe I'm half awake of the moment
Maybe I'm not also
As I try to pinch my fair skin
I could feel not an ache, but
Rather, am emptiness within
I'm bored and exhausted
With my daily life, daily routine
Quite monotonous, very lonesome

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cindy Velasquez 02 November 2008

i love the last line...keep writing :)

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success