Saturday, November 1, 2014

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It was frightening sit side by side, strangers all around,
in sombre mood I silently sat, staring at the ground.
I did not want to be in here, this is no place for me,
my mind played games, thinking of other places I could be.
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brian naugher
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Philemon Lamdapba 01 November 2014

a nice poem, good use of imagery... a good poet you are

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Gajanan Mishra 01 November 2014

stranger and smiling bright. I like it. thanks.

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Claudge Ben-at 01 November 2014

Alright. I call this an artistic poem of yours. Stranger, its an interesting set of view to be read.Nice, lovely.

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