Wednesday, June 7, 2006

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You call me every day and night
You call me and e-mail me time after time
You always want to talk
I just want to walk
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Gabriella Franco
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Leo Lopes 14 August 2006

'you want to keep moving foward, let me take a few steps back' this reminds me of that song from GTA '2 steps foward and 2 steps back' That songs heaps catchy and i like the way you've contrasted that song into your poem it's cool.... i also use parts of other songs in my poems

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