Sunday, July 19, 2009

Swallows Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Swallows fly high this evening
Chasing bugs.
For those little things they dart in changing directions;
Rise up, plummet.
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Adrian Thomas
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Marieta Maglas 30 July 2009

A symbolistical poem to be study and digested.......well written.....10

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~ Jon London ~ 19 July 2009

A caring share piece my friend...a splash of suttle imagery paints the scene well.....nice work Adrian.....shows you have heart

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Carol Gall 19 July 2009

a caring poem shows who you are nice

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Gary Witt 19 July 2009

Life is fragile, and of course that is part of its beauty. Watching birds, mindful of their mortality, is a fresh take. Very nice. Thanks, G

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Adrian Thomas

Bridgend, South wales, UK
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