Swimming Within Poem by Josh Alfred

Swimming Within

Rating: 5.0


Eyes seem to focus
On something within
Floating inward
Places I've never been
Imaginary rivers
Of thoughts racing past
The fisher casts
His line, the mind asks.
Coming to answers
Seen in habits
Making a wish
Swim along
Mischievous fish

Tuesday, March 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fish,inward,swimming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 16 March 2016

Floating inward Places I've never been Imaginary rivers Of thoughts racing past.. powerful imagination turning into symbols. very nice poem. thank you dear poet. tony

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