Wednesday, September 23, 2009

That Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

He clung to me, he cried you know
He began to pray
He tried and begged and pleaded
As I said he had to pay
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Carla Nestoros
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Nicole Gehrman 23 September 2009

this is excelent i really love it. u should definatly keep writing more poems like these

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Paul Hansford 23 September 2009

A powerful and passionate piece, with a tight and natural rhyme scheme.

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