Friday, July 13, 2012

The Apocalypses Of The Constellation Comments

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When I was very young I dreamed of having a Unicon
Even though mother can't buy a bicycle seat.
I dreamed of being a wing horse and cluster in constellation,
Although our local heroes can weed hectare
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pedro moshood
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Captain Cur 13 July 2012

I really enjoyed this poem Pedro. You used the metaphors well, and you ended your poem not on rubble, but on a shiny star. Great job!

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