The concrete is visible,
the abstract is invisible.
The concrete is the outside,
the abstract is the inside.
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God is inside us, so we are godlike - the idea of the poet is quite unique. As the beauty of a rose is inseparable yet invisible, so God is within us- I like the concept of the poem very much.
This is an unparallel poem which opens up the mind's eye. Thanks to the poet.
This is the kind of poetry I aim to produce but fail. It not only made me smile but made me think about the concepts involved. Very good work.