The Day Poem by Brittni Collins

The Day



The day you die,
I will cry.

The day you fail,
I won't bail.

The day I stop caring,
Is the day I stop breathing.



I also made this in my history class. I know it is pretty lame, But I got bored. Please leave me comments on how you liked it if you did what you liked or disliked how I could improve it and others. You can also give me ideas (easier the better) on things I could write about.. Thank you! Please no rude comments!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Steven Aragon 05 November 2009

keep writing about the day! ! im sure there's a lot more you could come up with. Don't let you self consciousness impede you from writing.. write with no judgement. write to write! you'd be surprised how your work comes out once you do.

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