The Demon Poem by Shastina McElmurry

The Demon



The demon inside of me is broken.
My words are totally unspoken.
He makes me hurt anyone or anything I see.
Im surprised he hasn't killing me.
I hurt everyone I know.
He's shooting pain from head to toe.
The demon is running threw my veins.
Im serious not insain.
I wish he would die.
He always makes me lie.
Im slowly getting evil.

HE WONT STOP UNTIL HE GETS HIS REVENGE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kerry Abercrombie 14 June 2008

This is a very deep on a literal and metaphorical level, I see a few errors in the line up of words in a single line where a different form would be more clear, but over all i love the poem. And thank you for the comment on my poem, it means alot. Email me: Xexx_Demone@hotmail.com if you would like me to explain why I wrote the poem, It's always nice for a person to see themselves in someone else's writings, and with the speaking of Growth in mine, I feel honoured you and proud that you see your self so well in it

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Janetta Mcelmurry 25 March 2008

is there really a demon in you

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