Thursday, July 7, 2011

The Desert Plain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind blew, like a breath
Across the desert plain.
The sweeping land, which never
Felt the tender kiss of rain.
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Emily Hero
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A lovely poem with nice imagery and similes. I rate it ten but it doesn't seem to work. Keep writing and UR AWESOME HERO! ! !

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