Tuesday, February 21, 2012

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I've said some really hurtful things
But only out of spite
I've never ever meant them
Or what went on Friday night
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Holly Lewis
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Michael Williams 21 February 2012

This was well written and with much feeling and sometimes I find that in writting a poem, things show that I did not know.

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Martin O'Neill 21 February 2012

Good for you! Head high. Important. P.S. Line 11 should read losing, not loosing. Pardon me for correcting but spelling is important as the boy who went into the laddies found out!

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