The Eyes Talk..... Poem by Kalyani Prakash

The Eyes Talk.....

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The eyes Talk.....

As they sat there
Both were on air

Dreaming about the future they would have
If anyone of them dared....

He turned and looked
Her eyes were hooked

His eyes asked her 'What did you decide? '
Her eyes answered 'What should I decide? '

His eyes asked her again 'What do you think is right? '
Her eyes answered 'Love has no wrong or right'

That evening
Proved meaning

To their lives
And their strives

That evening was witness to the fact that...
the eyes talk......

Tuesday, May 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nice piece. I liked the flow. On line 10, you wrote: Her answered. Think you meant Hers answered. Would like to make a suggestion on the same line 10 but it's up to you. Love has no wrong, only right instead of Love has no wrong or right. Good poem.

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