Tuesday, May 13, 2014

The Eyes Talk..... Comments

Rating: 3.5

The eyes Talk.....

As they sat there
Both were on air
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Kalyani Prakash
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Nice piece. I liked the flow. On line 10, you wrote: Her answered. Think you meant Hers answered. Would like to make a suggestion on the same line 10 but it's up to you. Love has no wrong, only right instead of Love has no wrong or right. Good poem.

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