FALCON, A CHILD WHO WAS TO ONCE DANCE WITH LIGHT, TRAVELING TRUE BOTH TIME AND SPACE,
THE CHILD OF BLIGHT WHO FELL FROM GRACE!
BUT STILL TRUTH ON HIS BACK IS CARRIED,
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What is a 'FINIAL DANCE'? Your use of metaphor...could be quite worrying.
Great imagination, holds your attention as you read. Well done! ; D