The Final Battle Poem by Xanadu Trevino

The Final Battle



The sword hit like a strike of lighting
Wonded yet strong
Push on through
Fighting all who come along
Lookinf for one
Who is my reason for hate
Finding him i stand straight
With pressing pain like and electric shock
I lift my sword to his bowed head
Letting my arm dropp like an ancher

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anthony Williams 17 June 2009

i like the theme of the mid evil times, i found a deep meaning to the poem. The metaphor i got from it is that in life you never back down and stay strong. The fact that you showed it instead of telling it was great.

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