Thursday, August 30, 2012

The Fly Comments

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There sits a young girl aged only a few.
A mind of wonder that calls untested.
But not today, for destiny will try.
Upon her hand down lands a fly
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Roman Franklin
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Adeline Foster 01 September 2012

I understand the rhyme scheme but the poem seems to fall flat. Adeline

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