Monday, September 19, 2016

The Half Woman Comments

Rating: 4.1

She was completely innocent at first
Deceit crept in and forcefully took away her virginity
Lies threw her on the streets - corrupting her innocence.
With sweet songs, men from yonder and thither came and went;
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Yomi Oguntoyinbo
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Akinrotoye Elizabeth 190110006 13 September 2021

This is a great one sir, this shows how ladies are been deceived by men.it also means that as a lady we should be careful

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Fajana Oluwanifemi Kingsley 13 September 2021

A very nice poem

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jemma 29 May 2018

Nice poem sir..

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Omobolaji 17 May 2018

Nice poem Sir..... An innocent woman who was brutalized by the society... Well done Sir

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Mopelola 17 May 2018

Add a comment.wow so thouching kudos to u sir

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debby 15 May 2018

wow nice piece of work sir

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Blakduke Merit 15 May 2018

This is just so touching... Well done sir

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Justus Cyril E 29 March 2018

Nice PIECE of LYRICAL ART

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Michael Ordia 25 March 2018

Beautiful. I love the way you show the way women are deceived by men and the negative ways the society contribute.

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Benjamin oluwadamilare 01 March 2018

A very touching peom sir. The ladies should really be careful of deception..

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Tako omotoyosi Elizabeth 28 February 2018

The poem is so touching... And we ladies we have to be very careful. Great work sir.

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Adebayo Nurudeen Damilare 28 February 2018

This piece of artwork written by yomi oguntoyingbo clearly talks about the innocence of a woman, who was brutalised by the society, where she lost her pride and was rendered helpless and shameless. Not everything is bad in the past, sometimes we have to hold on in the past, so that we can know what to do in the future More of this sir, thank you...

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Kasumu_damilola adenike 28 February 2018

Men with their sweet mouth, is only GOD can save women from men. Great work Sir

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Kasumu_damilola adenike 28 February 2018

Men with their sweet mouth,is only GOD can save women from men.Great work Sir.

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Ayeka damilola omotoyosi 28 February 2018

wonderful great work sir.

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Ayeka damilola omotoyosi 28 February 2018

wonderful great work sir.

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Gbadebo kanyinsola Esther. 28 February 2018

men and their sweet mouth, may God help we girl.

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sadiku aishat kemi 28 February 2018

God shoud save us from Men, and Woman should remember: “All Gilters are not Gold“. Great work Sir.

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sadiku aishat kemi 28 February 2018

God shoud save us from Men, and Woman should remember: “All Gilters are not Gold“. Great work Sir.

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Wonderful tale Sir. Raping ruins life, I pray it doesn't come our way.

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