Saturday, January 10, 2026

The Hill Comments

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Field of plains—
Hills of singularity.
A tree of fruitlessness
Atop the hill.
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VaGótha Kuroibara
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Slumber should be slumbers

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This is a thoughtful and spiritually resonant poem with strong symbolic depth. Your imagery is mature, introspective, and emotionally honest, showing a clear poetic voice and philosophical sensitivity. However Incorrect line: Venture far? I don not go. Corrected line: Venture far? I do not go.

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