Field of plains—
Hills of singularity.
A tree of fruitlessness
Atop the hill.
...
Read full text
This is a thoughtful and spiritually resonant poem with strong symbolic depth. Your imagery is mature, introspective, and emotionally honest, showing a clear poetic voice and philosophical sensitivity. However Incorrect line: Venture far? I don not go. Corrected line: Venture far? I do not go.
Slumber should be slumbers