The Home Within Poem by Naih Garang

The Home Within

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I have a home,
so small and tiny,
but can take non but you,
the place i called home within.

I have a home,
so cool and beautiful,
strongly made with shade,
Yes! the home within.

The home within,
is ever the safest,
so guarded and hardest,
to break into just like maximum prison.

This is just like a hut,
so praise for one like you,
a place that don't hurt,
and many pursue.

My loving heart,
is your home within,
Kept clean, not bleeding,
But tight like a tin.

Home within,
is where you belong,
treat it, honor but don't sin,
For there is non but you.

Friday, February 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 29 March 2016

My loving heart, is your home within, Kept clean, not bleeding, But tight like a tin. no sin, no bleeding, kept within, my heart is your home............... within. lovely poem. it is in its simplicity, so clear and fine. th ank you dear poet. tony

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Rajnish Manga 26 February 2016

My loving heart, is your home within, Home within, is where you belong, ...../ So beautiful and an amazing place to live in. Thanks.

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G N Peter Akol 26 February 2016

You are welcome.......... i wrote this when i was lonely thinking of the one i love.

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Naih Garang

Naih Garang

Anyidi village South Sudan
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