The Last Breath Of Friendship Comments

The message of the poem is good, but it should not have been entitled “Ended Friendship”… ended friendship is good to use if someone has been hurt by the one being called a friend and so they break the bond of friendship for bad reasons… it should have been “Friends Till the End” or “Eternal Friendship” or “The last breath of friendship”. Just not ended friendship… anyways, mine is just a suggestion, it was still written well. Thanks by way... :)