Saturday, November 19, 2005

The Last Sunset Comments

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The sand gets trapped between my body, as I roll about on the beach,
But that is the least of my delights.
The eyes of everybody look to the magical rainbow,
Like if they were in some kind of trance.
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Miranda Coffey 27 November 2005

Now this is the kind of poem that warms your heart and gently spreads a smile on your face! I LOVE the way you took such a simple theme and illustrated it so eloquently. Truly inspiring. ~miranda

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Natalie Clyne

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