The Light At The End Comments

Kevin i like this poem but may i say you have lots of filler words that are not needed that makes the read harder. i love this poem and i will redo it just for myself. to kinda show you what mean. No matter how hard school it seems, always can be better Then strong as a tree, you just have to be, surviving the stormy weather Imagine the math, yes science, is causing trouble Stay the right path or your problems just might double just a little rewording gives this poem a really nice read i like poem