Thursday, July 12, 2012

The Lock Comments

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She wanders around
A lock in her hands
'Do you have the key? '
She quietly demands
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Nicole Newby
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Emily Oldham 12 July 2012

This is brilliant! I love the use of repetition and the lock/key imagery running throughout the poem. I hope you find your key, keep writing :)

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Nicole Newby

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