Tuesday, December 20, 2011

The Lost Dove Comments

Rating: 5.0

I could see it fly,
Endlessly soaring onwards,
Careful to avoid the shimmering smoke
Whispering through the sky
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Josh Southern
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Josh Southern 23 December 2011

Its a person describing a dove from a distance... The man is fearful/dying due to war ('a troop of snowflakes' represents the troops) . The man tries to seek salvation in imagining the warmth of home but he's too cold/hurt and this loss of hope and peace in the world is shown through the dove disappearing at the end

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