Friday, October 17, 2014

The Man Who Drew Dreams With His Ebony Cane. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day seemed to start in an old fashioned way
With arguments, laughter and children at play,
The only thing different and wholly unplanned
Was the man on the beach who drew dreams in the sand,
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Keith Robson Sr.
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Achill Lad 17 October 2014

Was the man on the beach who drew dreams in the sand, ..................This is such a wonderful line, depicting hopelessness. This is a truly great poem, sound reasoning, a delight to read. Among the best that I have come across on this site.

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