Thursday, April 19, 2018
The Naked Reality Comments
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Baseless bondage & ties dead, Still an endless journey, a ray of hope,
A veineffort I had............
This is life cried my conscience
But countless queries haunted my mind.......
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Robert Murray Smith
19 April 2018
A very good write as your first poem on this site. However, do not abbreviate to such an extent. Also, correct spelling errors.
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12/6/2025 12:15:22 PM # 1.0.0
ends up with melancholy, good write