Wednesday, November 1, 2006

The Night I Met You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time bend,
and the night
became long and white.
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Niko Tiliopoulos
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Cece Lamberts 20 April 2007

Another really good poem! My favorite lines: 'Slowly unwrapping emotions, carelessly hidden under layers of pain and pretence, ' and 'We had wasted our youth in a lie.' This last one should be my motto. At least you put a happy end to this story. Keep writing and posting, CeCe

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