Friday, July 4, 2008

The Oak And The Rose, Cont'D Comments

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This is the original 'the Oak and the Rose' by Shel Silverstein

An oak tree and a rosebush grew,
Young and green together,
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Serenity Prayer 08 July 2008

interesting. i like how you added on in the roses point of view. when i read the first one i felt like it just cut off, like it wasnt the end, but since you added on it makes more since and i think it makes it better. great job.

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