The Other Saw It Bare Poem by princess Ubaezuomu

The Other Saw It Bare

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The Other Saw It Bare

"I'm repulsed by you, "
I say.
Maybe that will make me feel better.

Frozen, trying to remember memories
because you made me hate them.
Two sinners bonded,
creating a friendship
against everything in the commandment.

Oh, look what we became
One sinner gave it all.
The other… saw it bare.
The sinners?
Both right.
No wrong.

The sinners are separated.
One saw it as a joke.
One swore it all.
One never forgave.
Both fell.

The Devil laughed.

I saw.

Thursday, September 11, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: broken friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Wrote it about a broken friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
June Gray 28 November 2025

wow. it might be about a friendship, but it seems like something else to me, which I think is a quality of the best poems- something u can relate to. Great job.

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