Thursday, April 8, 2010

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I was full of love,
enjoyed this life,
It never dawned on me to see the light,
I laughed,
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Heather Mains
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Adeline Foster 19 July 2014

How many young would-be poets on this sight have been trying to say just that thing. You said it for them all. Still, the answer is not the quest for love. Remember the adage: When you stop chasing fun, you'll find joy. Same with love: stop chasing it and it'll find you. Make a better you and a better life will find you. Now, read mine - Bloom of Youth - Adeline

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loNeLY AnGel 08 April 2010

so much meaning with only a few words.. i love this poem.. don't stop writting

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Tatiana Guerrier 08 April 2010

omgee i love this poem and i used to be like that too... dont worry girl u'll get through it soon or later... God is here to help but only if you pray and ask and really want it. ♥

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