The Pain Of Being Me. Poem by Cody Moore

The Pain Of Being Me.

Rating: 3.4


I sit here with great mental anguish,

Acidic thoughts in my mind languish

my head is a demonic playground

with there claws my senses they pound

come death come I invite thee

in only death can I be truely free

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katharine O'Neal 14 January 2008

wow, another great poem for it's strikingly dark theme and bleek ending. it is a truly gorgeous idea that one is completely free in death, but also rather sad that one would invite it. again, great great imagery with the demonic play ground and the claws, it really gives the 'mental anguish' life. thanks for posting, Kath

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Soul Writer 10 January 2008

Another great write cody, with your great vocabulary i think you could even expand on this one.... have a look at my poem 'The Beast Within' 1st poem i ever wrote. Think you might find some similarity's Peace

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Barbara Bizarro 09 January 2008

Wow, this is really good, Cody...

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